
How To Write Stanford's Supplemental Essays
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Kimberley L.
Former Stanford Admissions Officer
Stanford could fill its class many times over with perfect grades and test scores. What it can't replicate is you: the specific way you think, what lights you up, and who you'd be to the person sleeping in the next bed.
Former admissions officers note that leadership is evaluated through voluntary.
Intellectual Vitality
Nerdy, specific curiosity that feels lived-in, not performed for the application.
Authentic Voice
Essays should sound like the student, not a committee of adults polishing every line.
Warmth and Generosity
A student who lifts others up, even when writing about their own achievements.
Specificity
Details no one else could write make the essay feel real, memorable, and earned.
Continuity
Each essay should add to one clear picture of the student, not pull it apart.
Resilience
Challenge, recalibration, and growth should come through without sounding rehearsed.
The differentiator really can lay on the essays and how they think. The essays are not so much valued for what I'm learning about what the student has done, but what I'm learning about how the student is thinking and how their thought processes have changed or developed

Kimberley L.
Former Stanford Admissions Officer
Stanford isn't asking what you've done. It's asking whether a reader would recognize you from your essays alone.
In their essays, they kind of don't hold back in their excitement. They're writing what they want to write, not toning it down because they think that's what an admission officer wants to read."

Kimberley L.
Former Stanford Admissions Officer
Fifty words is not a limitation. It's an invitation to say one true thing clearly and that turns out to be harder, and more revealing, than most applicants expect.
Intellectual vitality is that excitement when you learn something new, when you’d rather follow the rabbit hole than write tomorrow’s English paper. We see it from teachers too: the student who comes in early just to talk about a new paper they read.

Kimberley L.
Former Stanford Admissions Officer
The learning essay isn't asking what subject you study. It's asking what it feels like to be you inside a subject, and whether that feeling comes off the page.
The roommate essay was hands down the best essay for an admission officer. You could see engagement and purpose there. Sometimes a great applicant would write, ‘I’m putting painter’s tape down the middle of the room,’ and you’re like, okay, that’s not what we want.

Kimberley L.
Former Stanford Admissions Officer
The roommate essay works when it sounds like something a person actually wrote, not something submitted for a college application. If you printed it out and a friend found it, would they recognize you in it?
Students who were able to find a place at Stanford that resonated with them -- that's going to be different for every student. We were always looking for that genuine intellectual vitality, that excitement, that strong character. The ones who just cut and pasted, that was always disappointing.

Kimberley L.
Former Stanford Admissions Officer
The distinctive contribution essay isn't asking what Stanford can do for you. It's asking what you'd bring that no one else in the pool could, and whether you know yourself well enough to say.
Briefly elaborate on one of your extracurricular activities, a job you hold, or responsibilities you have for your family.
Admitted Student | Stanford University
When my uncle went missing in Germany, I led a search from afar, solely equipped with Grandma's prayers. As my family's only English-speaker, I handled police reports, contacted humanitarian organizations, mobilized local volunteers to hang posters in his neighborhood, and coded programs that notified me if he appeared active online.
The 512 MB flash drive near the bed allows me to feel the personal connection to the work and adds a human touch to it.

Lauren P.
Head of Essay Mentoring at Crimson
I always quote this one — my first year at Stanford, I had an essay about chicken nuggets. That kid had fun writing the essay, and they wrote the essay that they wanted to write, not the one that they thought we wanted to read.

Kimberley L.
Former Stanford Admissions Officer
We could see students doing an eye-watering number of extracurriculars with great leadership, but without real passion or engagement. Strong students had continuity across the whole application. The résumé stackers lacked that passion, and we could see right through it.

Kimberley L.
Former Stanford Admissions Officer
The most common Stanford essay mistake isn't the wrong topic. It's the right topic written from the outside in -- describing rather than inhabiting, performing rather than revealing.
Students being able to articulate their why — why this matters to them, why this academic topic is so exciting — that's a little more rare in the process. There's an overabundance of academic strength, lots of kids doing everything outside the classroom. But the why is what makes it memorable.

Kimberley L.
Former Stanford Admissions Officer
